Spring Haiku

The Spring path at the island of Mainau during...

Farewell Soft Wind

Spring’s final farewell
whispers gently on the wind
with tomorrow’s hope

It’s Time Again

Tic tock says the clock
Blooming flowers having peaked
Time to spring ahead

The Race Goes On

A circle of time:
Summer catches the baton
as we watch spring fade.

Inspired by Kyoshi Takahama, these haiku are a take on his poem, the Night of Spring.  It reminds me of the observer watching spring fade away.  The poems, above, are my take on that theme.  In this case, I ended up re-writing two of them because I thought the originals were just too darn depressing.  The clever prompt for today comes from the daily haiku challenge at Carpe Diem.

Advertisements

About ewdupler

Gene is an avid outdoorsman, loves reading and is known to put pen to paper (well, he types) as an amateur poet.
This entry was posted in Carpe Diem, Poetry and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink.

8 Responses to Spring Haiku

  1. Lovely. I enjoyed all three.
    Jennifer

  2. These are really nicely composed Gene. All three haiku are little gems. Chapeau.

  3. WabiSabi says:

    Sometimes evoking a feeling of sadness is the point of writing a haiku! 🙂

    Night Of Spring

  4. Ese' s Voice says:

    Beautiful collection – must admit the mood of the spring’s final farewell “speaks” to me the most 🙂

  5. tomorrow’s hope has a nice ring to it!

  6. Ah beautiful.. fortunately we can still count on springtime bliss a little longer up here in the north.

  7. jazzbumpa says:

    you have purged all depressing elements
    these are quiet and serene
    nicely done

    cheers!
    JzB

  8. Maggie Grace says:

    “summer catches the baton”…love that phrase!

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s