Natural Dreams

Zen filled words from the pages of Kyoshi Takahama are the inspiration for this haiku.

A picture about the spring.Natural Dreams

With drooping eyelids
Spring blossoms and gentle winds
Caressing my soul


Dreams of spring are second only to actually going out to enjoy it. I really love all four seasons, which makes it easy to write about. Though in this case, I mimic Kyoshi Takahama’s “Shutting My Eyes” haiku as a response to a writing prompt from Carpe Diem.

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About ewdupler

Gene is an avid outdoorsman, loves reading and is known to put pen to paper (well, he types) as an amateur poet.
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5 Responses to Natural Dreams

  1. It seems to me that you are really starting to enjoy composing haiku. They become stronger day by day … and that makes me so happy to see that there are such talented haiku-poets. Thank you Gene for being a participant at Carpe Diem.

  2. 4joy says:

    a soft and beautiful caress it is…

  3. Maggie Grace says:

    Beautiful…you had me at drooping eyelids!

  4. Very good haiku.. I have drooping eyelids right now… soon bedtime.

  5. Pingback: Haiku Prompt: Dream | Missing the Muse

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