Bearing the seasons
But anticipates release
A tree welcomes fall
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Another Maggie Grace prompt at Carpe Diem! This time, the prompt was “release”, which is the perfect theme for fall.
Bearing the seasons
But anticipates release
A tree welcomes fall
—-
Another Maggie Grace prompt at Carpe Diem! This time, the prompt was “release”, which is the perfect theme for fall.
I like the tree bearing fall…..that’s about where I am….. tsk tsk…..opie
Nice response on ‘release’ Gene … a haiku written in the way of the classical haiku poets. Thank you for sharing.
Am thinking possible trees bearing fruit feels a burden/weight to the branches and the trees are grateful for their release. Taking that a step further, perhaps trees are nudists at heart and can’t wait to be relieved of their “clothing”. Lovely haiku.
“Baring in season
anticipating release
forest nudity,” perhaps?
Nudist trees was an angle I didn’t think of. I love the idea, you’re very clever!
lovely haiku keeping with traditional of a nature theme ~ well penned ~ carol, xx
Trees have no hang ups about letting go!! 🙂
A lovely thought that trees welcome fall-to start afresh:-)Funny,it brought to my mind the evergreen trees-possibly they do not like it -too conservative? 😉