Lonely Flower

Thorns... PAD #1070

A pretty rose –
But all those thorns
propose caution

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A thanbauk written for a Carpe Diem prompt. This short little form is surprisingly tricky.

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About ewdupler

Gene is an avid outdoorsman, loves reading and is known to put pen to paper (well, he types) as an amateur poet.
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4 Responses to Lonely Flower

  1. Great Than Bauk, and for sure a tricky poetry form, but also a joy to compose … has more dimensions as haiku I think.

  2. Very nice Gene
    I thought the Than Bauk looked too difficult so I did a Villanelle (and that was so easy -not!)

  3. Sun says:

    enjoyed your Thanbauk. ☺

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