Buson’s, a Hand-Ball

English: Cherry blossoms in Branch Brook Park,...

Childrens’ toy
Soaked and sodden by spring rain
Out of reach

Out of reach
Unlike spring cherry blossoms
Meaningless

Meaningless
Unrecognized by nature
Childrens’ toy

—-

Written in imitation of Buson, I used some of the background information on his haiku to construct this chained trio. I found the wonderful prompt for these haiku at Carpe Diem.

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About ewdupler

Gene is an avid outdoorsman, loves reading and is known to put pen to paper (well, he types) as an amateur poet.
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3 Responses to Buson’s, a Hand-Ball

  1. What a nice revised haiku trio (in cascade) Gene … thank you for sharing.

  2. Love this.. as always in a cascade it’s important that all are good haiku by themselves.

  3. Sun says:

    love the last one best…nature seeing toys as meaningless. good one. ☺

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