Loveless Drought

Once fertile soil is cause to pout,
devoid of fruit, despite my toil –
withering leaves in loveless drought.

Does your heart reap in other soil?
I’ll worm out truth, cast away doubt.

—-

In exactly 33 words, use this definition of the word, “worm”:

3 : to obtain or extract by artful or insidious questioning or by pleading, asking, or persuading —usually used with out of

Inspired by the writing prompt at Trifecta.

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About ewdupler

Gene is an avid outdoorsman, loves reading and is known to put pen to paper (well, he types) as an amateur poet.
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9 Responses to Loveless Drought

  1. Grace Black says:

    Lovely poetry in 33 words!

  2. whimsygizmo says:

    This is so well done, Gene. To use so few words, with rhyme so effectively wielded…NOT easy. By far one of my favorites this week.

  3. KymmInBarcelona says:

    Love the line ‘does your heart reap in other soil’, and the idea in it. Great poem.

  4. Nandie says:

    I very much like this! Have to agree about the line “does your heart reap in other soil?” Love the last line as well.

  5. Quickstepp says:

    My fave so far. The imagery of a worm in soil was delightful in combination with the use of the 3rd definition of worm. Sad, but lovely.

  6. Martha B says:

    This is awesome. I like when poetry doesn’t feel forced or contrived, and the fact that you pulled this off under such strict guidelines is impressive.

  7. stankmeaner says:

    Wow, that was really great, well done.

  8. Such a sad metaphor. Nicely done. Thanks for linking up.

  9. TNT says:

    Nice prose, great rhythm, complete, and nuanced. A nice piece of poetry. Good work.

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